The first draft of the extended essay was reviewed. Dom noted that although the main body of the text was solid, many of the paragraphs could be strengthened by referring back to the question and reiterating the point from a graphic design angle. The use of varied case studies was commended, however it was also noted that more design theory could provide a deeper context for the subject matter.
It was decided that in order for the content to better fit together as one the question could be changed to 'How Does The Legacy of Queer Zine Culture Affect the Design of Queer Publications Today'.